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~Life In Death~
Contributed by
misfitme
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Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 02:05:46 PM in AEST
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Life is given to birth~
life is given to earth
Given the space in between~
to define its own worth...
Not by that in achieved~
but in the end believed
Defining the essence~
that from the body leaves...
For, just as once was the womb~
a cradle is the tomb
A passage through which~
our journey is resumed...
just a thought...
~misfitme
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2007-07-14 14:05:46]
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Re: ~Life In Death~
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by FRANCO on
Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 02:30:10 PM AEST
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My friend It is not only philosophical but the truth...marvelous write.
FRANCO |
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Re: ~Life In Death~
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by Crow on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 12:43:09 AM AEST
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| Faith, so hard for some, leaves so many things meaningless to them..good read. Vincent |
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Re: ~Life In Death~
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by shelby on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 12:06:01 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this and is a powerful poem and message.
Michelle |
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Re: ~Life In Death~
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by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 12:08:45 PM AEST
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You know it feel's good to be right, and when it come's to your poetry, i'm never wrong. It
took me a bit to get past the second verse,
i was so busy relishing what is never the unatainable when it come to the enjoyment i receive from reading your most beautiful
poetry. but i finnaly made it to the end, i knew i would, forgive my arrogance, thinking i'd get enough of you, with just one read . . .
Ben |
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Re: ~Life In Death~
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by runawaynameless on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 12:58:17 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this. Some of the things you said made me think of things I have felt. There is only two consitant things in life, life and death. And whatever may or may not happen in between. |
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Re: ~Life In Death~
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 01:25:29 PM AEST
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Kerry,
My hippie sis, my angel....you are such a bright woman, so blessed with this undeniable knowledge. Such a powerful, truthful piece of writing.
Love it.
Peace, love and hugs
~Hippie Me |
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Re: ~Life In Death~
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by InfinitePoet on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 07:36:23 PM AEST
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| Bravo!! Well thought out and presentated with the fullest Talent! You must be a lil older meaning your no teeny bopper! As i always say the simple and true writes always come across the best and make ya think! thanks !Keep writing and posting always ! |
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Re: ~Life In Death~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 12:10:32 PM AEST
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Well my dear missy me!! I go away for a bit and LO! you have a new write! YAY!!!!!!
Hun, this is exceptional. What a beautifully and poetic way to look at this
philosophical existence and end .... or beginning - whatever. lol
Your musings always get my brain flowing with thought. I so love that about you!
perfectly put. And beautifully written.
~Breezy |
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Re: ~Life In Death~
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by Dom on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 05:35:23 PM AEST
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I'm with you in every word, in the wisdom and comprehension.
Life is given to us to make what we will of it, and while others may shape our life in the end it is always ourselves who make the choices.
Brilliant words hun!
Dom |
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Re: ~Life In Death~
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th July 2007 @ 01:47:32 AM AEST
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beautiful, it flows across the page right into ones heart and soul,
love n' hugs nessa
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