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The Butterfly
Contributed by
Lucy
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Saturday, 14th July 2007 @ 10:16:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The butterfly.
Like a psychedelic snowflake
When it sighs within the wind.
Floating.
Just an angel laced with promises
For the mutely waltzing sunhats.
Freedom.
To feel and scream, above, below.
Be an Icon to the cellmates.
Copyright ©
Lucy
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2007-07-14 22:16:07]
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Re: The Butterfly
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 12:30:06 AM AEST
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Lucy...
I loved this...each stanza was a flood of visions in my head. Brief write, but so very vivid in wording. Thanks for sharing.
Peace,
Laura
"The butterfly.
Like a psychedelic snowflake...."
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Re: The Butterfly
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 01:40:36 AM AEST
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| What a delightful poem well written and one that will surely stand out among many others. bern |
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Re: The Butterfly
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 07:06:05 AM AEST
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| I am always chasing the butterfly and this poem is as magically written as the flight they often flutter in. Great work. |
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Re: The Butterfly
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 03:26:35 AM AEST
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this is beautiful....
hugs n' love nessa
roses |
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