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Losing My Mind
Contributed by
InfinitePoet
on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 07:16:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Twisting&Turning
i'm losing my Mind,
Why can't I forget what
we left behind?
I'm pushing so hard,
but the thoughts
won't go,
Ican't keep my mind
still and why
I don't know..
Unanswered questions
float in my head
i'm trying to
remember
A Love that's
now DeaD,
All of the
Ki$$e$,
All of the Lies,
All the HeartBreak,
All the Tears i've cried,
but i'm still dizzy
and i'm still
Missing
You,& My
Heart
is still
BROKEN
after what
"WE"
put it through..................
PePPerMint Ki$$e$ 2007
Copyright ©
InfinitePoet
... [
2007-07-15 19:16:30]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: Losing My Mind
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by NoSaint on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 10:13:27 PM AEST
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Sometimes the hardest thing we can do is let go of the past so we can fully appreciate the present...you expressed yourself well here
NS |
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Re: Losing My Mind
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by funnyface09 on
Sunday, 15th July 2007 @ 10:26:36 PM AEST
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is never easy to forget a love that is so strong...and it is not easy to even stop thinking...
good luck..time will eventually make u a better person...
thanks for sharing this poem...
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Re: Losing My Mind
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by runawaynameless on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 01:25:30 AM AEST
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| I loved this. Maybe because I feel this way myself. |
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Re: Losing My Mind
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by Tot on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 02:23:20 AM AEST
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| we are all pieces of the life that we have lived...I think broken hearts never truly heal...perhaps we stick a bandaid on them, brush off and forge ahead in life...:) Loved the poem~ Tot |
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Re: Losing My Mind
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 02:23:31 AM AEST
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wonderfully flowing expression of feeling, keep fine tuning your talent:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Losing My Mind
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by Thespia on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 06:35:49 AM AEST
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| Cool poem, it flows so naturally with deep emotion. Good write! |
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Re: Losing My Mind
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by bluestars on
Monday, 16th July 2007 @ 06:54:02 AM AEST
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Everyone can relate
Its never easy to forget a great love
but like they say "time heals everything"
we just have to be patient
Thanks for sharing
Best wishes
~Bluestars~ |
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Re: Losing My Mind
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 04:31:22 AM AEST
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this is very sad but well expressed.. It is hard to get over things sometimes.. perhaps you feel that there wasn't clsoure or that something is unfinished. but this is a very good write with the expression of heartbreak.. good job
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Losing My Mind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 02:30:25 PM AEST
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your finest write in my opinion. it was passionate and well put together. great work.
-Phil |
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