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Bitter Sweet Memories
Contributed by
PoeticHybrid
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Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 12:47:55 AM in AEST
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The sweet scent of vanilla fills the room
As our candles lay burning
Shadows dance on our walls
Giving us our own unique theater
Our silhouettes dance all around us
as we stand there holding each other
With each flicker of the flame
a new dance move is added to the show
As we break apart, tears filling our eyes
We know we won't see each other again
So while you walk out my door
I cry the dancing flames away
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2007-07-17 00:47:55]
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Re: Bitter Sweet Memories
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by Nates_JrAT on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 02:37:44 AM AEST
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| very sad and heartfelt....very good write, I felt it |
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Re: Bitter Sweet Memories
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 03:58:44 AM AEST
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a very passionately sad expressive write.. I loved the ending.. so heartfelt and it hits home the way its written great job
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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