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Know me well
Contributed by
nates_jrat
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Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 03:49:10 AM in AEST
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If I could tell the world 1 thing
I'd simply stand in peace
not a word would form
instead I'd grab my sheath
I'd cut a line across my chest
and show them all my heart
let them hear its rhythm strong
and see me torn apart
I'd let them know I'm flesh and bone
I bleed and cry the same
I live my life from day to day
and carefully play the game
I work and go to college
so open up your eyes
and see the person standing tall
the truth behind the lies.
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2007-07-17 03:49:10]
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Re: Know me well
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 03:57:00 AM AEST
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this is a very powerful expressive write.. peace is something hard to come by these days. you captured the equality feeling well though great job
rock on,
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Re: Know me well
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 17th July 2007 @ 09:24:44 AM AEST
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very profound. There is an urge to just overlook the masses
and pass judgments based on falsities ... (or what is believed to be true ... )
sensational thoughts herein. I adore writes that drive on the edge
of the provocative and this one serves well. Great job!
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Re: Know me well
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by Crow on
Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 06:24:49 AM AEST
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great courage in this write, sometimes we are led by the majority, as others are. hopefully that might change.
"If I could tell the world 1 thing
I'd simply stand in peace"
really like this statement. Vincent |
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