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Painted Smile
Contributed by
happybunnyfan
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Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 11:33:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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And Ill make this, make this go away
Watching the sunrise on top of the bay
All the pretty colors and sugar-coated words mislead me instead
Kind of like that perfect women you cant get out of your head
Eyes with mixtures of yellows and blues
Inspiring from your greatest muse
A face that can stares holes right through you
Leaving you motionless with nothing to do
Lips like joyful clouds no matter where you might be
Just like those summer nights that set you free
Porcelain body that could turn back time
One of those portraits you cant get out of your mind
And then the sun begins to fade
Remembering I once had this picture I made
With all the pain she left behind
A long with the love I was able to find
So with this brush and paper cup
Ill erase this memory and make it up
Make it all, make it all go away
Yeah, Ill paint it all away.
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happybunnyfan
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2007-07-18 11:33:19]
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Re: Painted Smile
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 18th July 2007 @ 12:25:54 PM AEST
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wow this is extremely powerful and i loved the stanzas. this is an awesome emotional expression of losing a loved one.. I love the ending line especially.. makes it sounds like you draw and are going to paint the pain away.. i like that imagery to this.. marvelous!!
rock on,
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