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The Turn Around
Contributed by
LanBanan88
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Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 07:12:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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((** ok well this has a background story to it...i was at a very low stage of my life where i thought that i didnt have a future, because of acedemic results...i even contemplated suicide...but after running up a huge bill trying to talk to people. i decided to talk to my parents about it...and they were the biggest help ever...this is basically to them.....please comment and tell me what category this should go in..im not too certain with inspiration..i dunno...and any suggestions for the title, or is it ok? thanks! Lana xo **))
They say for me to close my eyes
so I can feel the peace within
But even that i have tried
And i still dont feel anything
I breathe in deeply just as im told
As i count from one to ten
And as im doing so it fails
Because my pain just begins again
I try to not think about it
but it all seems to come back
There i see myself standing alone
on my extremly lost track
I cannot seem to focus
I cannot seem to think
I keep bringing myself donw
most of the times without even knowing it
The picture keeps appearing
im such a failure
All rugged up and poor
Ive lost all my friends and family
thers no one left to adore
But then suddenly i see the light
and i dont no what to do
i saw a beautiful figure come out of it
the day i talked to you
You bent down to lend your hand
i grabbed it without a second thought
the love and understanding that was expressed
can never ever be bought
Im so lucky, so grateful to have parents like you
that i rarely do appreciate
you rarely dish out rules for us to follow
instead you cooperate
That day we talked i realised that
i finally got it right
that you were my miracle, my angel
from that shining light
I now close my eyes
i feel the peace within
then i get a surprise
i see a future so beautiful, ive never seen.
Lana
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Re: The Turn Around
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by Hannah_Heaven on
Thursday, 19th July 2007 @ 10:58:02 PM AEST
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im going through my high school results for college and i havent done to well :|
so i can relate to this .. i dont know where iam right now or where im going
but i think it will work out .. your poem kinda made realise there is help
thanks xx
great write :] really spoke |
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