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World Worth Dying For
Contributed by
LoztSn1p3r
on
Friday, 20th July 2007 @ 02:47:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Set me off like dynamite strapped tight around my waist.
We are the ones in competition but claim this ain't no race.
Take a breath and explode like bullets,
Tearing through the wind.
Cut me up with a razor blade,
Then try to separate the skin.
Now when the,
White flames are burning flags,
We found a world worth dying for.
We've been battered so hard that,
We don't feel anymore.
So take me, from this world,
Save me, what if we all die young?
Copyright ©
LoztSn1p3r
... [
2007-07-20 14:47:41]
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Re: World Worth Dying For
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 20th July 2007 @ 03:34:19 PM AEST
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nice, i like the feeling of despair and anger mixed together here,
"Take a breath and explode like bullets,
Tearing through the wind.
Cut me up with a razor blade,
Then try to separate the skin."
i loved those lines, it reminds me of the soothing touch of the blade...
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Re: World Worth Dying For
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by tifrob on
Friday, 20th July 2007 @ 04:05:51 PM AEST
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Woe, this was deep. I had to read it a couple of times. Good write.
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