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Touch of a Hand
Contributed by
crow
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Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 12:53:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Looking right..far off to the Sunset thoughts rush back, many good things, I look left...Her eyes cast to the waves of a turbulent sea, the scape solid, sands that leave...She places her hand under mine.
I find myself telling me of my world, without a glace knowing her`s is upon her, minutes in reverence, warmth of her hand.
This is my friend... love and honesty, bridge the waters flowing through, I am honest in her softness, and warmth, part of my life, I do not wish to fool" times the touch of her hand...I am undone..Vincent
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Re: Touch of a Hand
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 01:23:25 AM AEST (User
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Oh god, that was so intense....so beautiful...so free. Vincent, I am in awe of your wonderful writes. I loved this!
Much peace, love and hugs,
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Re: Touch of a Hand
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dom on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 03:16:27 AM AEST (User
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Even the simplest of actions can unleash so many emotions in us, one moment and infinite thoughts and consequences.
Lovely poem, raw and intense.
Take care,
Dom |
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Re: Touch of a Hand
(User Rating: 1 ) by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 03:45:32 AM AEST (User
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This is beautiful i am sure your friend will love it.
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Re: Touch of a Hand
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 05:05:30 AM AEST (User
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YOu tugged my heart again here my friend.
THis is lovely lane, nothing better than the touch of hand, which melts the thought and heart.
hugs
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Re: Touch of a Hand
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Saturday, 21st July 2007 @ 10:16:53 PM AEST (User
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this was incredible
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Re: Touch of a Hand
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 05:00:45 PM AEST (User
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Amazing, my long time friend.
One can feel the majic in these beautifullo, tender, sweet words. Someone is very lucky.
big smiles, huggs,
emy |
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