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PRESIOUS MOMENTS
Contributed by
physcoquack
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Monday, 23rd July 2007 @ 02:23:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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presious moments come
from the sweetest things
your eyes sparkle
in meer moonlight
enlighting my mind
with beauty and peace
I slumber at ease
knowing your next to me
my deepest emotion is connected
with our true love
my hand your gentle touch
oh how I love you so much
the world of gold and silver
doesnt compare
to the touch of your hair
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2007-07-23 02:23:00]
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Re: PRESIOUS MOMENTS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd July 2007 @ 08:46:52 AM AEST
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a wonderful finely rhythmic work of romance. The last line is perfect. A great job!
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Re: PRESIOUS MOMENTS
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 04:31:19 AM AEST
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beautiful and flowing...
hugs n' love nessa |
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