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Thinking
Contributed by
trisha
on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I love when you hold me tight
You keep me safe. Can you see?
I hear your voices.
See your blue eyes looking in my
Brown shine eyes.
I love when I see your bright smile.
What's all that for?
I hate the way I miss you.
I hear your voices calling my name.
I look your not there.
I can hear the phone ringing
It's not you what was I thinking.
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trisha
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2003-03-02 10:00:00]
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Re: Thinking
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by riverofwords on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 01:12:29 AM AEST
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the longing and the wishing are so strong in this
good write
peace be your journey
terry
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Re: Thinking
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by AngryPrincess on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 01:17:40 AM AEST
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:O)
Lindsey |
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Re: Thinking
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by Cutey on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 10:01:05 PM AEST
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| I can see the hurt and the pain for waiting and wishing i know all them so very well and when you wish the hardes it never comes true oh happens i love this it is very good done keep up the good work. |
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Re: Thinking
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by stateofgray on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 07:49:58 PM AEST
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| i hate how i miss people, that at dont miss me. its life great irony, i loved your poem |
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