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Aristhimus
Contributed by
NDean
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Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 05:13:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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I stared out upon a long and unperverted landscape
Where dewberries flourished like morning rain.
And that led me further
into that kindled soul where alder-bush grew and
buried lost souls.
Plus how could I forget Aristhimus and his kindred sprit.
Oh how could I forget him.
How?
And where does that take me - it takes me to my
Ivory Tower...
rose petals and more
so grain
sand
dewfall
skylark
green fielded snow.
Feebled Phlebus grew so steadily like
Greg or Snowdon or rain.
Where art thou!?
Go now Penelope.
Go forth and wonder like your father said you should
Because if you dont
I cannot show you
Elderberry Lane.
Copyright ©
NDean
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2007-07-24 05:13:16]
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Re: Aristhimus
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 07:42:42 AM AEST
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Creative write I liked it, hope your nightmares go way too.
Michelle |
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Re: Aristhimus
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 11:52:06 PM AEST
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this style has always interested me, it has always stood out from athers..good write.
I wanted to thank you for coming around and reading me. Vincent |
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Re: Aristhimus
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by Asthenia on
Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 02:58:29 AM AEST
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That was awesome, I really enjoyed this write!
"And where does that take me - it takes me to my
Ivory Tower...
rose petals and more
so grain
sand
dewfall
skylark
green fielded snow."
I really liked that little section, good write here...it fascinated me!
I appreciate you reading some of my things too :)
-Everette |
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