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IF?!?!?!?!
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 12:26:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If i ever asked why
would you answer
If i ever asked how
Would it be when
If I ever said how come
Would it be i dont know
If i ever said yes
would it be no
If i ever said now
Would it be so
If I ever asked nothing
Would it be questioned
How can i ask anything
It wouldnt be returned
It would be questioned back
And nothing to yearn
How can i beg
For which i wouldnt do
All i want is to be with you
CAN ONE NOT KNOW
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brew
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2007-07-24 12:26:26]
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Re: IF?!?!?!?!
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by brew on
Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 12:37:59 PM AEST
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Did not mean to use the same title as a another,never saw until I was scrolling though, writes.........SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
brew~ |
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Re: IF?!?!?!?!
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 24th July 2007 @ 11:34:05 PM AEST
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| Brew, the heart is an amazing engine..good write! Vincent |
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Re: IF?!?!?!?!
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by funnyface09 on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 02:51:14 AM AEST
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this is amazing,brew..thanks for sharing..
the last line somehow says what is inside my heart...:) |
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Re: IF?!?!?!?!
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 03:41:44 AM AEST
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wow this is very short and very powerful!! beautifully written.. everyone on here can relate to this at some point. its so passionate.. awesome job
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: IF?!?!?!?!
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by jingles on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 04:46:18 AM AEST
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true feeling and emotion from the heart. the last two lines really touched me. great job :)
*jingles* |
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Re: IF?!?!?!?!
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by UnknownLegend on
Sunday, 27th January 2008 @ 12:39:50 PM AEST
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| Poems titles, song titles and other assorted titles can't be copyrighted so you're safe ........ Now......! If I asked WHERE ...... what elusive answer would I expect.??? I must say .. This is quite thought provoking and hauntingly beautiful. |
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