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Pushing Away
Contributed by
xfallenxfariex
on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 01:21:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I'm sorry we faded,
I'm sorry we broke away.
I'm sorry we lost faith.
And now it seems like we're so full of hate.
So bound to never speak again.
So out of touch.
And I'm sorry if you don't care about me.
And I'm so sorry things have changed.
I can't tell you how you've effected me because.. even I don't know.
So goodbye sir.
Goodbye stranger.
Goodbye old friend.
Maybe we'll meet again someday.
Copyright ©
xfallenxfariex
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2007-07-25 01:21:24]
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Re: Pushing Away
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 03:39:48 AM AEST
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this is a sad write.. sounds like confusion here likel someone is unsure of how something effected them.. good write though
rock on,
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Re: Pushing Away
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by EddieDean on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 03:42:59 PM AEST
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Very short and very direct. Its a powerful write, I really enjoyed reading it.
Very good work.
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