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You Don’t Exist
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 07:18:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I feel like the luckiest man in the world when I am near you
Every second is stolen
No air is wasted
I inhale you
--completely--
I bring you in
There is a calmness that follows your flow
A serenity in your movement
The beauty that brings you to life
I would die
To be born again with you
Somewhere,
fate haunts this meeting
I ignore the threats
and stare into your eyes
Regardless
As you stand there this very moment
Hair perfect
Face glowing
I want you
--completely--
I need you
My words are faint and forced
Yours are smooth and true
My mistake will cost
When all is lost-
While forgetting about you
__________
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Copyright ©
Jyssvw22
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2007-07-25 07:18:58]
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Re: You Don’t Exist
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by AnenaLynne on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 02:30:35 PM AEST
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that was soo sweet and i thought it flowed beautifully
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Re: You Don’t Exist
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 01:48:13 AM AEST
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Shoot man, I have read this several times and it feels so love/hate to me....It is beautiful but almost feels obsessive and then the ending just left me cold. Interesting feel to it, let me tell you. I would love to hear your perspective on it. Great write...I love those which leave me wondering a bit.
Much peace and hugs,
Laura |
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