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Thanks To You
Contributed by
Static_Lullaby
on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 02:31:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Pain for pleasure, A razor's kiss is love
Mind numbed, Life fades away slowly
My moans the song of a morning dove
The life bestowed upon me nothing but bliss
I killed reality, With a mind sedated
A depressed adolescent, The razor insists
It speaks, Tells me all the time it loves me
Then it kisses me, Lets the blood flow
Im going to a better place, I'll be happier free
Skin allowing a river of red, My mind.. Defeat
Just waiting for the river to stop..
The sedatives to cease, My heart stop it's beat
...............................................................
Life deleted and your the one to thank
Copyright ©
Static_Lullaby
... [
2007-07-25 14:31:02]
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Re: Thanks To You
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by AnenaLynne on
Wednesday, 25th July 2007 @ 02:34:53 PM AEST
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wow...very haunting (haunting is good!) lol
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Re: Thanks To You
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 07:13:46 AM AEST
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Though I personally have in a sense gotten out of the angst poetry myself I still admire reading it, especially when it is good. This in that category soars! It was damn good and shows the rough coal of diamond poetic ability. I look forward to seeing your work continue. A hell of a job !
BRAVO!
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