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REGRETS
Contributed by
brew
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Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 12:42:18 PM in AEST
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Have you ever needed something
Something more than what is given...
A simply hug
A simply kiss
A simple Hi
Could one ever do so.....?
How can one ask
How can one want
How can one get
Simpleness isnt offered
Its taken
Its not given back
Too many demand
When you walk that path
Its a simple one
Then it becomes a task
A task of regret
Simplify ......and give
Take and make happy
Do not regret
Smile
IS it THAT hard...
I have too add so many give the way they see fit.but its not always a way that will taken.. Its lost....What one has , or had gotten, except, but if regrets...RUN!
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Re: REGRETS
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by emystar on
Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 12:58:44 PM AEST
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Good work, friend.
Huggs,
emy |
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Re: REGRETS
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 12:58:56 PM AEST
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SO MANY DEMANDS BUT YET SO LITTLE THEY OFFER IN RETURN ,IF IT CAN'T BE GIVEN IT CAN'T BE TAKEN ,SOME HAVE NOTHING TO GIVE
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Re: REGRETS
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 01:11:30 PM AEST
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Hi Dayna girl! :)
(nice to see a new post)
There are many things I could place here ... the emotions
and remembrances your piece found for me.. my own
muddled thoughts on the subject .. how much comfort and
wisdom lie inside your words ...
but, I think it will justify it enough to quote you ..
"Simplify ......and give
Take and make happy
Do not regret
Smile"
yeah .. well said hun. VERY well said indeed!!
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: REGRETS
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by funnyface09 on
Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 01:22:39 PM AEST
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i think is a blessing to be able to give..
thanks for sharing..well written...
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Re: REGRETS
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 02:34:08 AM AEST
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wow this is very true.. i like the stanza and wording.. so eloquently written
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: REGRETS
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 04:46:09 PM AEST
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Hey Brew~
Your poetry is such a joy to read for it's written from the depths of your beautiful heart.
I love these lines~
Simplify ......and give
Take and make happy
Do not regret
Smile
Excellently penned as is all your write my dear friend. Hoping that all is well with you~
*love n hugs*
dreamer
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Re: REGRETS
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 05:36:52 AM AEST
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What courage your writting displays, oh 2 be able 2 ask these questions and get an honest answer in place of false assumption as always your writting is of the upmost to put
it mildly, incredibly brilliant . . .
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Re: REGRETS
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by endlesspath on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 12:57:09 PM AEST
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so many take and never give back
how can they
i cant answer your thoughts are questions
i hope you find what your looking for
maybe stop looking
maybe its there
endless |
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Re: REGRETS
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 4th September 2020 @ 10:36:40 PM AEST
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| So true. What I see here. |
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