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Light Up Ahead
Contributed by
AnenaLynne
on
Thursday, 26th July 2007 @ 01:57:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The anger that coursed through her veins
As she wandered down the street,
Couldnt match the rainstorms temper
As rain pounded at her feet.
The rainstorms violent fury
Made it impossible to tell
Whether rain cascaded down her cheeks
Or if it were tears that fell.
Desperate shadows from her past
Haunt her day and night.
Nightmares from her memories
Made her hope and courage take flight.
Constant battles rage inside her unrepentant heart.
With no hope left for tomorrow
She closes her eyes and envelopes the dark.
What would she give if she could find a way
To make her secret turmoil go away?
Its hard to go forward without a light up ahead.
Hot tears fall on the pavement
Her soul feels like lead.
Suddenly she crumbles, and falls to her knees.
Her death will come painfully, without any ease.
Her eyes start to water
As she wonders what tomorrow will bring.
She knows the next few moments
Will end her suffering.
She lays shivering on the sidewalk,
Hands clutching her chest,
Wondering if anyone will mourn
Her tragic, untimely death.
Copyright ©
AnenaLynne
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2007-07-26 13:57:09]
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Re: Light Up Ahead
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 04:16:23 PM AEST
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Wow, I have read some of your poetry and I must say that I'm quite impressed. You have a way of expressing yourself and I absolutely love how you bring it across to your reader. Keep at it and I can see you getting far with your writing. Wishing you and Jessi R much brighter days ahead. Goodluck and keep up the great work.
warm hugs,
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Re: Light Up Ahead
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by onlyme1119 on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 04:28:35 AM AEST
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| i love the angst in your poems...they suffer so silently, yet you cant help but be enthralled by their pain...keep it up! |
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Re: Light Up Ahead
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by love_lost on
Sunday, 23rd September 2007 @ 12:33:36 PM AEST
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| i really like how your poems are about sad and difficult topics, but there not preachy or too sappy...just enough angst lol..and i really liked this one! |
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Re: Light Up Ahead
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by GuyJular on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 02:40:48 PM AEST
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| Eh it's aight |
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