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Lucid Dream( just watching it flow)
Contributed by
zenith66
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Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 10:59:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Just a dream, noiseless wind encircling me,
And clouds of golden fingers stretch and further still,
No voices up here, they are not needed,
Just echoes , at the apex, of cooling water purer than the soul,
Dropping from beneath these clouds, Earth will soon be touched
I have awokenand further still I see through open eyes,
There rises from the sea through breaking cloud,
An island? No just grass, and a single bowing tree,
And I think I am there!!! so I am
Rolling from its leafy canopy, as water now, a journey of no significance? No more!
From my mind they swim anew, these spectacular images profound, captivated!!!
Now I embrace the scene from some far place. A cliff, sweeping from sea to sky,
Crimson sea shimmering as I know it should, vivid lands, saturate my vision, tell me this is not real,!!!
For that song that flocking birds do sing , birds of white on silent wing
I have not heard its tune before
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Re: Lucid Dream( just watching it flow)
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by sportychick5434 on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 11:47:29 AM AEST
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| I really like this poem to me it just seems so real... like you just had a dream about it. I also like your choice or words! |
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