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Fairies of Fire
Contributed by
Athenus
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Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 06:53:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Fairies dancing
in the light
like fires burning
its quite a sight
Purples, Reds
Blues and Greens,
All different colours
that can be seen
These creatures flicker
in and out
as fires smoulder
without a doubt
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Athenus
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2007-07-27 18:53:50]
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Re: Fairies of Fire
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 07:35:11 AM AEST
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i enjoyed this yet i wasn't so sure about the last stanza. the idea of a fire smouldering doesn't seem to embellish the idea of them flickering. would you consider swapping it for embers, perhaps? a good read, though.
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