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When the Sun Falls
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 08:12:17 PM in AEST
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When the sun falls upon this day
The demons creep out from their graves
Dark angels haunt your very soul
And ghastly gloom doth take its toll
The sun is shrouded by devils cloak
The words of demons with gothic note
An angel with wings of scaring dread
Proclaim to all real life is dead
The waning moon disappears from sight
The werewolf cries at dead of night
The entity it wakes from its sleep
Its journey long, its thoughts so deep
And so the sun falls and we prepare for doom
The air is cold as the the demon looms
The Angel of death she takes her place
The utter end of all human race
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jerseysue
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2007-07-27 20:12:17]
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Re: When the Sun Falls
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 10:12:25 PM AEST
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short but very powerful.. a great idea from a comment you have gotten.. I really liked this poem.. very creative and well penned out.. nice flow to it also.. great job
Rock on,
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Re: When the Sun Falls
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 03:48:38 AM AEST
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Wow! Ya seem to have taken your poetic abilities to a higher level, Suexx. I agree with Jenni, this is powerful!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: When the Sun Falls
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by Dom on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 05:11:30 AM AEST
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Powerful indeed, and darkly menacing.
The imagery is potent and chilling to the soul.
Great write!
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Re: When the Sun Falls
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 09:23:30 AM AEST
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Hey you, where you been hiding?Not that I can talk, lol. I have missed you so my dear friend.
Wow, I got to hand it to ya~ you did a mighty fine job with this write Sue. Different from your usual writes, but hey I absolutely love it girl. So good to see a new post from you.
Hoping to see more of you and your wonderful poetry here at YPDC.
*much love n hugs*
sue m |
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Re: When the Sun Falls
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th May 2014 @ 12:54:34 AM AEST
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| wicked excellent! hugs n' love nessa |
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