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Eternal Bliss
Contributed by
jv2543
on
Friday, 27th July 2007 @ 10:59:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A real woman
Ready to hold it down
for a real man
Embracing ur intellect
Melting me with ur dialect
I can sit here and give you
Endless compliments..
Caring, understanding,
Thoughtful, compassionate
Oh ya lets not forget my favorite...
That oh so intense passion
Is this real?
or is it a dream Im having
If a dream...let me bite an apple
So I can stay fast asleep
And await for you my prince charming
Youre the one Ive been longing
I will stay in my dreams
And wait for that one special kiss
That will lift me up into eternal bliss.
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jv2543
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2007-07-27 22:59:18]
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Re: Eternal Bliss
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by yackerz85 on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 01:43:02 PM AEST
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Welcome back. You write like you have never stopped. I hope you have a great future of writing poetry and continue to wow people with works as good as this one.
~Mark~ |
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Re: Eternal Bliss
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by GuyJular on
Friday, 20th August 2010 @ 10:02:29 AM AEST
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| I hope u got the guy lol |
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