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Rosies
Contributed by
Reason-rhymer
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Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 04:55:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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"Rosies"
Shes got her rose colored glasses,
she takes them three times day,
they make her world so much simpler,
they blow her history away.
She sits and stares out the window,
waiting for her Bobby to come home.
Hes been gone for over 10 years now,
but she dont feel so alone.
She used to be so much more lively
when Bobby met her that first day at school,
when her sister died on a Monday,
the doctor fixed her-- with the tool.
Shes got her rose colored glasses,
she takes them three times day,
they make her world so much simpler
they blow her history away.
He tried to get her to stop drinking,
he tried to get her to get off the meds.
She could never make it through a Monday,
shed put on her rosies instead.
He used to kiss her good morning,
he used to kiss her good night,
he left her late one evening,
he had to get her out of his sight.
Shes got her rose colored glasses,
she takes them three times day,
they make her world so much simpler,
they blow her history away.
She tries to remember her sister,
who she dosent remember to miss,
she tries to remember her Bobby,
but she dosent remember his kiss.
She sits and stares out her window,
waiting for her Bobby to come home,
hes been gone for over 10 years now,
but she dont feel so alone.
Shes got her rose colored glasses,
She takes them three times day,
they make her world so much simpler
they blow her history away.
George
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Re: Rosies
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th July 2007 @ 06:30:17 PM AEST
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| Boy what a sad poem. I know what you mean by the rose coloured glasses I take mine religiously every day but happily I still have all of my mental faculties. Your poem hit me rather hard great work top marks from bern. |
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Re: Rosies
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th July 2007 @ 02:03:31 AM AEST
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excellent write, sadly beautiful....
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Rosies
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by yackerz85 on
Sunday, 29th July 2007 @ 12:18:36 PM AEST
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The fact that this poem represents the plight of many people makes this poem all the more sad. It is beautifully written uses repitition very effectively.
~Mark~ |
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Re: Rosies
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 10:51:50 AM AEST
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Damn .. this is so incredibly sad, for numerous reasons ...
You captured in essence, (and amazingly so), how some deal with
the torment of living in a heavily emotionally burdened world.
I love, (more than love, really), the metaphor. It could have very
easily been turned into cliché, but you poetically danced your
way 'round that and came out with a very deep, very emotional,
very well done piece. Bravo, poet. This was heart wrenching ~
~Breezy |
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