|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Not Your Average Valentines Day Poem
Contributed by
Athenus
on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 10:46:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
|
Cant you see what you do to me, what youve done to me?
Why? Why cant you see this?
You seem to drain every ounce of happiness from me
Leaving only a cold miserable shell behind
I hate you; I hate the very essence of you
So why? Why do I live with you? Why do I love you?
I cant stand you
I cant even stand being near you
Talking to you
I just wanna rip your head off
And be done with you
I want you to go away, leave me alone
So why, why do you make me cry
Dont you understand that what you say hurts?
Hurts inside, hurts right here inside?
I just cant
I cant take this anymore
Good-bye
Copyright ©
Athenus
... [
2007-07-30 22:46:28]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Not Your Average Valentines Day Poem
(User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticHybrid on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 10:53:53 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Nicely written. It brings a song by Three Days Grace to mind, "I Hate Everything About You". |
|
|
Re: Not Your Average Valentines Day Poem
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 10:59:01 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| If this is true I would advse you to leave him or her at once. bern |
|
|
Re: Not Your Average Valentines Day Poem
(User Rating: 1 )
by OneLastTime on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 01:42:14 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Beautiful poem, really intense ! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
