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Life
Contributed by
Athenus
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Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 03:50:32 AM in AEST
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Life is just a big hole and every day you just dig deeper and deeper hoping that one day youll be able to dig you way out but all that happens is that you go deeper into the hole and it gets darker the lower to go heading for the dark black nothingness that is your soul no way of escape no way to crawl your way out but finally after all this time of despair and torment in your darkness you see a light small at first so small that at first it can easily be missed but in the dark nothingness that is your hole it shines so brightly. As you head for the tiny light digging, searching trying to find its source after awhile the light seems to get bigger and brighter and at last after all these years you see the world for what it really is a beautiful place with colour, light and best of all life its self for without life you were nothing just a mindless zombie digging a hole but finally after so much longing and yearning youve finally have become complete for once you were lost and now your found welcome back to the land of the living my friend
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Re: Life
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by steven_fenton1982 on
Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 04:06:30 AM AEST
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| oooh very nice, very deep! well done |
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Re: Life
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by brew on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 12:43:27 PM AEST
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way deep and dark.......finding ones self would be suggested , yet i liked the write......
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