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Promise

Contributed by janice on Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 11:10:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Weve been together for a long time,
You told me, I am yours and you are mine,
Weve spent every single day being together,
We promised each other that our love will be forever,

You said you hate it when you see me cry,
You said I want to be with you until I die,
You said every I Love You came from your heart,
You wont stop loving me, you wont get tired,

But as days gone by every night I cry,
I wait for you as minutes fly by,
The moment I woke up, you werent there,
In my heart I ask you
Do you really love me, do you really care?

Ive been looking for you, calling you,
I went to your house but youre not there too,
You didnt left any note informing me where you are,
I was so concerned, I think of you every minute, every hour,

One day while walking down town,
I walked in the church, and saw a girl in a gown,
Theres a wedding going on, I didnt know,
I sat there as petals of roses started to flow,

I just watched the bride as I was sitting there,
And I was so surprised that you were there,
I wanted to get near you but I just stood up,
The wind, my heart, I felt like it stopped,

You may now kiss the bride the priest said,
In that time, I think I departed,
The girl you kissed in front of the altar wasnt me,
But somehow, I just pray it was me,

That day, you called and told me you were sorry,
You didnt leave a note to inform me,
That youre on a business trip in China,
And you said you just arrived from Malaysia,

I told you I just saw you,
In front of another girl promising I do,
I told you I dont believe youd hurt me like this,
But I assure, something about you I will miss,

I told you someday shell find out about us,
But now, our love will no longer be love, but dust,
I dont hate you, I just hate some things that you do,
Ill say goodbye now, hope shell find true love from you,

Yes I was hurt and felt so bad,
And its not worth it just because of him, I would feel sad,
I tried my best loving him with all of my heart,
But I think my best wasnt good enough,
So I think I should go back from the start,

Lets just say nothing happened and I dont know him at all,
For an unintelligent guy like him my tears wont fall,
I gave my best and I think he did not,
But then I was the one who got hurt, who struggled and who fought,

I told myself Ive got to move on,
I wont be alone, night, morning or dawn,
Ill find a guy much better than you,
Wholl never promise, but in actions I know hell always do.




Copyright © janice ... [ 2007-08-02 23:10:11]
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Re: Promise (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 11:12:13 PM AEST
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a very touching piece... nicely done!

wiz




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