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An Ocean's First Love
Contributed by
freemysoul13
on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 02:47:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Shells filled with hopes and dreams
Are washed onto the beach
By the Ocean of sweet surrender
A torrent of emotions enter
With each passing wave
Love doesn't seem so far away
Cliffs: Sturdy and strong are
Surpassed by raging hurricanes
You are my restraint
The one person with which I can be calm
On my guard endlessly
When you're not around
Powerful blows can knock down
Unsuspecting travelers
Fragile will is easily wielded
A pure heart will be my undoing
My love for you is a little unnerving
Boundaries aren't meant to be broken
But somehow you've gotten through
Was this my wish?
My hope?
My dream?
Of you
First love
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2007-08-03 14:47:26]
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Re: An Ocean's First Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by PoeticHybrid on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 03:54:51 PM AEST
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| I really liked this one. Nice flow, and I really don't see a part that doesn't make sense. Nicely done. |
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Re: An Ocean's First Love
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by Reason-rhymer on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 06:37:21 PM AEST
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WOW! This was a nice flowing read, I loved it.
Fragile will is easily wielded
A pure heart will be my undoing
My love for you is a little unnerving
Boundaries aren't meant to be broken
But somehow you've gotten through
I really like these lines.
Well done. |
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