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Spiral Down
Contributed by
stecks
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Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 04:13:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Falling down ,
Feeling Lost,
No Place to think,
No place to dwell,
trying to find my way out,
through the fog,
through the dust,
confused on my problems,
unable to sleep,
in pills to deep,
losing the time,
losing my mind,
cant hear a sound,
because i spiral down.
Copyright ©
stecks
... [
2007-08-03 16:13:23]
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Re: Spiral Down
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by emystar on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 04:31:38 PM AEST
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Sad but good writing.
Hang tuff, my friend as joy cometh in the morning.
huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Spiral Down
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by Reason-rhymer on
Friday, 3rd August 2007 @ 06:18:55 PM AEST
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| Nice flow, easy to read. You descibe the going donw the tubes well. Perhaps your next piece you can describe climbing back up. |
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Re: Spiral Down
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 02:25:25 AM AEST
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this is very sad.. its very powerful and expressively sad.. but i love the ending .. great job and nice flow to this
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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