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What Went Wrong ?
Contributed by
blueheart
on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 05:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Why am I staring at emptiness?
So dissillusioned and lonely,
It wasn't supposed to be like this,
I planned so I would be great,
The coolest girl around,
Complete with respect and admiration,
Yet silence is all I have now,
What went wrong?
My heart is aching, the pain I bear,
I ran too far ahead, I didn't look back,
I thought I had friends,
When I needed them where did they go?
My friendships have crumbled, I thought they were strong,
There's no one by my side anymore,
What went wrong?
I need to be loved,
I need a soul mate,
There's someone special for everyone,
Or so they say,
Then I should have found him by now,
He should be holding me close,
Yet I only have a one way romance,
The craving for trust and companionship lingers,
What went wrong?
I pretend it's all okay,
Like life was perfect and flawless,
But my soul thirsts for more,
Everything is insufficient,
I thought I planned it well,
A future so whole and meaningful,
Yet I sit here in the corner of my room,
Wondering what went wrong.
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Re: What Went Wrong ?
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 07:46:16 AM AEST
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| awwww, all in good time, all in good time, when you quit looking he will be there as surely as your reflection in the mirror:) |
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Re: What Went Wrong ?
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by Ronald on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 12:48:45 AM AEST
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| Good poem! |
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Re: What Went Wrong ?
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by Arwen on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 11:45:35 AM AEST
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good stuff :)) I could completely identify with your feelings in the third paragraph. A beautifully heartfelt poem. I was also looking for 'the ONE' that perfect specimen of a man who would complete my soul...but I've figured he doesn't exist. For me. I've stopped looking. You, on the other hand have so much to offer. You WILL find him...I promise :) All in good time.
* Happiness, always *
Arwen |
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Re: What Went Wrong ?
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by Trisha on
Monday, 28th April 2003 @ 12:30:56 AM AEST
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| This is really good |
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Re: What Went Wrong ?
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 10:43:20 AM AEST
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| Ahh my young friend..love, like a good poem, cannot be rushed into existance. If you have a chance read When You Least Expect It on my page. I really enjoyed this very emotional piece of yours! Well done! :o) Larry |
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Re: What Went Wrong ?
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Sunday, 29th June 2003 @ 11:15:53 AM AEST
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This made me cry
for it hit to close to home
I understand completely
how you feel when your alone
Stacie (Hiddendarkness1705) |
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Re: What Went Wrong ?
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by Qohinoor on
Friday, 5th September 2003 @ 12:05:39 AM AEST
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Love yourself.
Then give away
All the love
You feel today. |
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Re: What Went Wrong ?
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 09:52:27 PM AEST
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| Awww sweety, this is such a sad poem. Love will come in all due time. Just hang in there. It will be ok. :o) *S* Cynthia |
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