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What's wrong with me
Contributed by
crazylady
on
Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 08:39:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Ive fallen harder than I ever have before
Didnt think these tears could flow anymore
But they do
Im so lost in the darkness Ive created
All the passion Ive anticipated
Has died now
I wish I could start over
I used to swear I wouldnt be like her
But I am
I wish you could mold me to fit your life
I wish for you I could be the perfect wife
I just dont know anymore cause
Im not your dream girl.
Im not the one you fell for.
Im a horrible mess now.
What is wrong with me?
I wish I could be better, baby...
I try so hard but I just dont know what to do.
I think of me and I think of you
Im just so sorry
Dont cry for me
Dont die for me
Dont leave for me
Dont bleed for me
Dont live for me
Dont wish for me
Dont do anything for me
Cause I cant do anything for you
All I can say is
I love you
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2007-08-04 08:39:00]
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Re: What's wrong with me
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by Xmorbid6childrnx on
Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 01:54:03 PM AEST
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Aww,
....
I feel like this sometimes,
the feeling is horrible...
and when you cant control it
you get confused.
you get caught up.
your an amazing writer and im sure your and amazing wife...
dont be so hard on your self.. you only get one chance to live |
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Re: What's wrong with me
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 02:54:26 PM AEST
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a tragic love feeling poem, hrm...you are an amazing writer, the fact that i could feel some of your emotion proves that. so many times people categorize their poems as emotional, angry, happy, etc...but their poem is lost on others not feeling what they feel.
people constantly change throughout their life times. if your fiancee expects you to stay the same person from however long ago he met you, then he is delusional. to marry is to accept the good and the bad in the person, the person that is always changing. |
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