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A chance to be a friend
Contributed by
janice
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Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 01:15:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I was walking alone last night,
I look upon the stars shining so bright,
I stopped by to the place where I first met you,
Feeling the cold breeze, I think of you,
I stare at the door where you first came in,
Yes! I can still feel the memries from within,
I closed my eyes coz I know that was a long time ago,
I closed my eyes coz I dont want my tears to flow,
I sat down and looked around,
Smiling, with my feet on the ground,
I can still remember the place where I used to sit,
Where I always wait for you to pass by, for me to greet,
I couldnt do anything but to sit and reminisce,
Dont know what to do, and what it is,
I can still see the times you smiled at me,
While I smile back and look at you perfectly,
But then it started to rain,
God and Satan are again playing a game,
It got colder,
It got darker,
I stood up and started to sing,
The song that I heard you sing, a way memories could bring,
I walked out and felt the rain,
Raised up my hands and screamed out your name,
I got down on my knees, broke down and cry,
A few minutes, I just looked up and smiled,
I was still crying, thinking about those memries,
Memries of a special person that I really miss,
Thinking that it aint gonna happen again,
Thinking, I didnt have the chance to be a friend.
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janice
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2007-08-04 13:15:01]
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Re: A chance to be a friend
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by PoeticHybrid on
Saturday, 4th August 2007 @ 03:57:51 PM AEST
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| Very nicely done! I can't put how this poem makes me feel into any words that will actually do it justice. Wow, just wow. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: A chance to be a friend
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by funnyface09 on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 02:16:49 AM AEST
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"Thinking, I didn’t have the chance to be a friend"
i love this phrase a lot...don't know why..
thanks for sharing it.. |
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