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Summer
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 05:42:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The summer is so hot.
I want to go get a burger
BuT i am afraid i will get cancer.
Noone knows what its like to get cancer.
Oh how i wished the summer wasnt so hot.
IT makes me feel so dirty..
But Atleast it doesnt give me cancer.
Summer is a bummer when its so hot.
But I changed my mind.
i am going to get me a burger.
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Re: Summer
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 11:28:31 AM AEST
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WOW 6 PEOPLE AND NO COMMENT ON MY POEM
WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS POEM.
I HATE LIFE.. .ITS SO *****Y
I want to die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i wished i didnt live at all.................... it suxs to
be when you have a ex that cusses you and you
are nothing to noone i am nothing but a maid. |
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Re: Summer
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 04:27:07 PM AEST
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Well, it's a great write.
Life can cause cancer so we should enjoy our burgers.
good work.
huggs,
emy |
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