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Ash
Contributed by
crow
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Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 08:26:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Hard to tell you
when a soul might rest
can not return
scatter the ash"
Misgivings of
blood..flesh and bone,
highest bidder
can expect no more.
Walls stay solid
though the light has gone
few" things remain
un-touchable.
Lay me down
let Me chase one tear..
the thought of finding your heart...Vincent
Copyright ©
crow
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2007-08-05 08:26:28]
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Re: Ash
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 10:26:32 AM AEST
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Oh Vincent, how torturously beautiful! This has me wading
deeply in the rivers of emotional torment. And yet, the torment
is remarkably comforting in a "this is so painfully beautiful"
sorta way. Wow. There is P A S S I O N in here that explodes
upon the page, my friend. I have known this path ... and I would
not trade going down it for ANYTHING in the world.
Stunning write, friend!
~Breezy |
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Re: Ash
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by emystar on
Sunday, 5th August 2007 @ 12:59:47 PM AEST
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ditto what she said.
Incredible writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Ash
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by Dom on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 02:51:30 AM AEST
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Beautiful write Vincent, one that is powerful in its brevity and the passion burning in between the lines.
Lovely,
Dom |
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Re: Ash
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 6th August 2007 @ 03:00:33 AM AEST
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OMG Enchanting....I love the ending....You are a sweet man, Vincent....somehow I just feel this haunted feeling when I read this....
Peace, love and hugs,
Laura |
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