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IT'S ABOUT DAMN TIME
Contributed by
Reason-rhymer
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Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 05:42:10 PM in AEST
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It's About Damn Time!
sometimes theres no-time,
feels like Im doing time.
looking for love time,
its too late, its bedtime.
too many late-times for lunchtime,
now it ragtime & wartime,
slapped for my two-times
pray time for peace times.
too busy for fun times
theres no time for downtime.
big-time losing time,
long time since my prime-time.
stealing time to make time,
work overtime for playtime.
in the meantime Ive lost time.
too much spent time missing time.
lifetime is too short-a-time,
To spend time wasting time.
long lost times and past times,
Its the right time for present time.
Its my time,
to make time,
for show time,
its about damn time!
Reasonrhymer
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Re: IT'S ABOUT DAMN TIME
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by trini on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 01:37:51 AM AEST
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That
was
AMAZING
I know how you feel.
But people are too greedy.
We want it all.
But no time like the present, stop worrying about what you're not doing, and start questioning why aren't you living.
Great poem.
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Re: IT'S ABOUT DAMN TIME
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by shelby on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 06:32:44 PM AEST
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Bravo! Creative write and I loved this, the concept of time is so eluding and you captured it perfectly
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