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????questions????
Contributed by
fadingaway
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Tuesday, 7th August 2007 @ 06:20:53 PM in AEST
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What's killing me is killing you,
It's something in the air that we breathe,
Something as soft as a whisper on the wind,
Breaking and spinning, winding us down,
Just like a clock that's past it's prime,
They say history was once written in the sands of time,
Another chapter has ended swept away buy the storm,
It comes to devouer all,
The destiny has set it's course and cannot be stopped,
It's not so much finding something that you love,
As finding the love in what you do,
Promises are lie's,
A literary error,
Destiney's a bomb,
Just waiting for you to strike the match and touch the fuse,
A inconceavable flaw that's slowly killing you,
Collateral damage is the seed,
Government is just another crook,
Here to steal what you've rightfully earned,
And these are the rambling of a young man,
To young to know what love means,
But not to young to experience it's heartaches,
I've been destined to do something but never knew what,
I've always wondered why it happened to me,
I've never really understood what you do to me,
But now I know,
I truely see,
My thoughts wonder like the tides of sea,
Breaking the rules and boundries of life,
Dancing on glass and biting my tounge,
I watch you leave again,
An angel in the sun,
Crimson pumps from every vein,
Tearing the skin like acid rain,
But these are the words of a immature youth,
How can the sustain any sustance,
How can society shut out our plee,
The answer to that is so easy,
They don't even listen,
They log us like trees,
Shut out our voice for the greater good,
And in doing so the have become the criminals,
The crimanals that they work so hard to keep from us,
But these are just the ramblings of a immature youth,
I don't understand the simple truth,
Maybe I will some day,
But that day is not today.
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Re: ????questions????
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by trini on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 01:31:40 AM AEST
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welll...
Just as an interpreter, I’d say you have a love and government thing going on here.
They kind of melded and fused together which made it such an interesting read.
You want to love and not be punished by the after mass of breakups. You want to live without the oppression of laws.
You want to escape but you have responsibilities.
Anarchy my friend. That’s what you are looking for.
Good job by the way. Loved the imagery.
-Trini
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Re: ????questions????
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 03:38:01 AM AEST
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great imagery.. it sounds as thoug you were thinking of your own questions mixed with the way the govt is and history.. well done
rock on,
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