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Realization
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 02:08:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I promise myself not to cry
Not to shed a tear
When you walked away from my life
I promise myself to be strong
To be strong to accept its over
To be strong to hold back the tears
Knowing youre gone now
I realized all I have now of you are memories
Memories so sweet it makes me smile
Memories so sad it makes my heart ache
As I begin to feel the coldness besides me
I felt the warmth on my face
As tears slowly trickled down
As the walls of tears slowly crumbled down
I only realized I have really love you with all my heart
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2007-08-08 14:08:17]
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Re: Realization
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by fadingaway on
Wednesday, 8th August 2007 @ 03:13:42 PM AEST
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Having it and losing it is always harder than never having it at all.
Good overall flow. keep writing.
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Re: Realization
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 01:57:02 AM AEST
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this is really sad and expressive.. someone once told me its better to have gotten to experience that feeling and lost it then never experiencing true love at all. never give up hope there is someone out there. everything happens for a reason.
rock on,
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Re: Realization
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by Crow on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 12:30:25 PM AEST
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| good work, Its so hard when you lose someone close..Vincent |
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