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NEW START
Contributed by
endlesspath
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Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 11:32:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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shall I try and see
what I believe
the endless write
that gives the life to breath
I have seen a greater start
From one who has the gift of Art
They are filled with total sincere:
So how do I make it clear
I'm not here to take thy heart
Just to you ;I give and begin, a new start
No materlistic do I seek
Just truth , honesty and all the friendship
Copyright ©
endlesspath
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2007-08-09 11:32:17]
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Re: NEW START
(User Rating: 1 )
by True on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 11:38:46 AM AEST
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| the wording can be a little ackward in places but it was overall a good write. The first stanza was awesome. |
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Re: NEW START
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by doug on
Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 09:17:33 PM AEST
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This is a great place to find new things
and friends. See you've already found
me. lol. You should stay here with us
for a good long while. Lovely writing.
Take care , Truly , Doug
ps . I agree with True about the first
stanza. |
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Re: NEW START
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by needledancing on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 02:18:47 AM AEST
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| A wonderful fresh start sounds good, all in good time. Sounds promising if one can muster the trust to move ahead.....maybe all in good time aye? |
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Re: NEW START
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 04:14:18 AM AEST
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a very well expressive write.. i liked the flow its very pleasent to read
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: NEW START
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by myheartsvoice on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 05:14:10 AM AEST
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Your poetry is imencly stylish in a simple innocent point blank manner, lovely just lovely, a breath of fresh air if i may say so. truly compelling . . .
Ben |
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Re: NEW START
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by Crow on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 12:19:24 PM AEST
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| how refreshing! very good read. Vincent |
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