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stains on the mirror
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Thursday, 9th August 2007 @ 02:05:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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as the clouds poor over threw my empty bottle
with the pain of last nights scars still stain the floor
i sense this torment is making me love
this empty visions bringing better thought's
as i step to the mirror to view your face
still burned in my mind
a needful longing in my soul
i bang at the walls
and scream at my mistakes
fists bruised with so many past flaws
i fall to my solitude with angry voices inside
seeing the red under the bed i uncork the memories
but the taste is to sour to swallow
i drop the vice and i walk to the mirror
looking for me inside
seeing my swollen eyes i feel relief
i am strong to past this faze
i look at the shattered stains of wine
like tears on the floor
i feel its pain
as it holds me above
and leads me outside
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Re: stains on the mirror
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 10th August 2007 @ 10:49:38 AM AEST
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Relic,
Powerful words..feels like you are speaking of addictions of some sort. Painful in part to read. Felt like I'd been here... somewhere...
Thanks for sharing, my friend.
Peace, love and hugs,
Laura |
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