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Nothing i can do
Contributed by
M
on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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There's nothing i can do,
To erase my twisted past,
'Cus this pain keeps digging deeper,
Like a corkscrew through my heart.
Why can't i be different?
Why can't i start again?
Why won't they let me out
Of their ***** play pen.
People wana help,
Or at least they say the do,
But they don't know how far gone i am,
Or how hard it will be to pull through.
Dreams are all i've got,
They're a place where i don't have to weep,
But tell me, what happens,
When this ***** invades my sleep?
Copyright ©
M
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2003-03-03 18:40:00]
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Re: Nothing i can do
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 04:55:13 PM AEST
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| wow...love the last verse...tis genius... |
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Re: Nothing i can do
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 05:27:28 PM AEST
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Emily this was amazing. I dont know what to say except all your poetry is so excelent. Never give up this talent you have. The 1st and last stanzas were amazing keep on writing and let the sun smile on your face.
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