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Long gone
Contributed by
joe89
on
Saturday, 11th August 2007 @ 12:42:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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whisky in one, and a fag in the other
the mind of my farther
the face of my mother
black silk locks, a tired lost brother
lost is my farther
long gone is my mother
and id do it all again with a smile on my face
admit not descretion, show no disgrace
blood passed down is diloted to myself
i expect only hapiness, good fortune, and health
hats of to me, a long lost lover
with the soul of my farther
and the spirt of my mother
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joe89
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2007-08-11 00:42:49]
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Re: Long gone
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by Adreana on
Saturday, 11th August 2007 @ 01:37:41 AM AEST
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| I really love this piece. I often find myself with whiskey in one hand and a fag in the other. That's a good blues singin' combination. For me, anyway. Again, love the write. Hang in there. ~Adreana |
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Re: Long gone
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by Davinah on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 12:49:58 AM AEST
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For me it's usually wodka :-)
Lovely write !
Hugs,
~D~
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