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Day Break
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
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Monday, 13th August 2007 @ 01:46:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Whispers of past battles
Are hauled by pure white horses
As softly, gently,
Break the placid waves.
Tumbling free over pebbles, shells,
Roaring with delight
Racing onto untouched sand
Only to retreat once more.
Bobbing by in the distance
Sails a small fishing boat
Nets in the water, all hands on deck
Waiting for the day's first catch
And now, see how the day breaks
And the water starts to glisten,
Aflame with the morning sun
Still new, still pure and trusting.
It casts a path upon the sea,
A road of water and fire
The elements mixed in harmony
As above the horizon rests the sun at day break.
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Re: Day Break
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 02:44:06 AM AEST
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wow!! amazingly beautiful image of day break...i loved this...just..beautiful..i don't know what else to say...but i especialy liked the very last stanza.."it casts a path upon the sea, A road of water and fire
The elements mixed in harmony
As above the horizon rests the sun at day break.".... |
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