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As I lay I n Bed
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Monday, 13th August 2007 @ 10:56:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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I hear a sound
I listen with my eyes
I know
there will be no sleep tonight
as a breeze flows
through
a closed window,
Shadows are dancing on the wall
Illusions come on strong
the candlelight flickers
and I hear unseen footsteps echo...
The bed is shaking
I feel a prescence
a evil essence
something watching me
and I shiver
cause now I hear a low moan.
A Chilling
feeling
was overwhelming me
I pulled up the covers
so I
could not see.
And then I
hear the creaking
of a door openning,
I'm shaking and I'm shivering
as something is whispering.
The covers are being
pulled down
in slow motion...
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2007-08-13 10:56:14]
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Re: As I lay I n Bed
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 11:28:40 AM AEST
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This is simply a good poem, i like the tence
implications it draws you in slowly and the ending definately compels you to eeerness.
well done . . .
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Re: As I lay I n Bed
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by emystar on
Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 12:28:04 PM AEST
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Wwwwow handsome,
Please remind me not to smoke any of that ****.
Big smiles, huggs,
emy |
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