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That Night...
Contributed by
Silent-Cry
on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She was too young,not even nineteen
That night she looked as beatiful as she had ever been
The pale moon enlightened her face
The light was turned off,her eyes brightened up the place
But the words that fell out of her mouth
Were dripping hate and insanity
"Your fault!"She cried
It's because of you that I'll die
And when I'll be dead it will be too late to cry
I hate the way you didn't love me right
Oh how cruel were those lies you made me believe!
In my private sky you were a star shining so bright...
And my eyes were oh-so blinded by your light!..."
As she said so out of nowhere she took a knife
And as she stabbed herself in the moonlight
Bloodstaining a skin so beautiful,so white
Of such a pure heart stealing the life
Hot,burning tears of sorrow rolled down my cheeks
As I witnessed,shuddering,that night
The end of our story,a tale that wasn't right.
Copyright ©
Silent-Cry
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2003-03-03 21:00:00]
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Re: That Night...
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by Percursors on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 09:24:46 PM AEST
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| "The end of our story,a tale that wasn't right." LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT...good write... |
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Re: That Night...
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by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 12:46:09 PM AEST
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| ahhh...this is beautiful... |
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Re: That Night...
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by Chenobi on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 02:14:46 PM AEST
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| This is very nice. Great emotions! I loved it! |
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Re: That Night...
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by angelrae on
Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 12:51:44 PM AEST
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| a great write, such wonderul and powerful emotion and feelings. Loved this poem very much |
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Re: That Night...
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by xraz0rx on
Friday, 4th July 2003 @ 11:47:46 AM AEST
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| beautiful work...keep it up. (missy) |
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