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Dead To Me.
Contributed by
GemmaLouiseRose
on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 03:43:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i see you in dreams..
...on photographs
but hardly and..
not many..
my words to you..
they go so unheard..
feels like im praying.
i hide away the things of you
the sight of them knock me down
knock me sick with sadness..
i cant remember what it felt like
to kiss you, hold you
what did you smell like..
i just dont know.
emptiness..
it takes hold, it wants me dead..
because you are dead..
..to me.
Copyright ©
GemmaLouiseRose
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2007-08-15 03:43:00]
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Re: Dead To Me.
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 15th August 2007 @ 05:00:58 AM AEST
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" knock me sick with sadness"
The topic says dark, but the message says
real pain and intence loss.
i love that line up above, Your approach is quite stylish yet not so much that it clutter's
or steals from the intensity of the peace . . .
Very revealing is your writting, most compelling to say the least, your an
excellant writter . . .
Ben |
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Re: Dead To Me.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th August 2007 @ 01:55:49 AM AEST
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| is he really dead. Your excellent poem suggests that you would be pleased to have him back again. Am I so wrong? bern |
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