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Two Birds
Contributed by
MattTheMan
on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Two birds in a tree.
One is happy, one is sad.
The one he loves treated him bad
And now he's down.
He sits in his nest.
The sun comes up
And he's still down.
All he does is lay around,
The day is gone.
Every day's the same.
The sun comes up,
The sun goes down.
All he does is lay around
And waste away.
One bird in a tree.
And she's still happy.
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MattTheMan
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2003-03-03 23:20:00]
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Re: Two Birds
(User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 10:08:25 AM AEST
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| Very cleverly done! I liked how you wrote this one,good write! Christina |
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