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confession of a poet true desire
Contributed by
SPOKENWORDARTIST
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Friday, 17th August 2007 @ 12:57:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Shall I tell you how your beauty mystifies my soul as it rides romance like the leaves that bend in the summer breeze.
Mother Nature has designed the rythmn of my beating heart to the tune of youre smile where lovers footprints trespass across the suns shadow scorchless path.
Beneath it all I have desolved beyond all repair and lost within your control ooh oh it's not my speech dipped with honey sweet over tones,
but the thought of you that from deep with in the complextion of these words speaks with weeping moans.
Release me of this awfull prison built by cupid grasp of me tease not with passion but feed my hunger with love
Quench my thirst with thy lips of caremel flavor if only once for a moment of peace.
Enbony princess tears shall not envade your eyes no more for your true prince has arrived.
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Re: confession of a poet true desire
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by ferasdour on
Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 06:43:24 AM AEST
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tis very nice, i can't realy say all that nmuch about the poem, however, your questions may be a different story.
1st. it doesn't seam likely. people are either afraid to trust such men, or think that belittling them will make them conform.
2nd. that i could not tell you, but it would depend upon the situation to which the woman would so figure out such things, as well as those to which she was around (her friends and such) |
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Re: confession of a poet true desire
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by endlesspath on
Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 12:08:09 PM AEST
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so disagreed with feds thoughts
you have took words and penned them for someone to fall and fall hard
but
prince
knight in shining aromour
i would have to say it would take me and keep me
but(again)
are you real and willing to be that real all the time with out the smoothing type...
we all females hope for their knight to appear, and go on hoping because usually the ones who are, hide deep secrets and go
i did love this write
it was with beauty and eleagance
just hope they like it and its true 200%
endless |
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