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serene
Contributed by
detourchick
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Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 06:50:28 AM in AEST
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Ripples float by me
My body serenely becomes one with the water
The sun shines down on my face
Tickling me with rays of warmth
Any cares that plagued me
Have miraculously swam away
Leaving only a lighthearted body
That deep breaths compliment
by jess
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detourchick
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2007-08-18 06:50:28]
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Re: serene
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by Adreana on
Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 07:54:03 AM AEST
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| Even I feel relieved by your piece. Sounds marvelous! A perfectly calming write! ~Adreana |
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Re: serene
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 11:11:54 AM AEST
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Wow, it'd be wonderful to feel so at peace.
I truly envy anyone in that state of calm.
It's beautifully written. |
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