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Uprise
Contributed by
Adreana
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Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 06:56:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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If this journey was meant to end here, it would
But things continue to flow with the beat of time
Everyone is running around, hastily and numbly
Unable to decipher the codes created to control.
Daily routine leads to little room for improvement
Steel tanks bring an unnatural element to view
And still the rich must have and the poor dream
Yes, let's destroy the world a little more... please.
All heads are turned, oblivious to their peripheral
Stars gleam in their eyes and dust settles in pockets
There is no rain to help saturate their thirsty minds
Only forceful winds to make them falter in each step.
Everybody wants to rule the world, I am no different
Nobody pays attention to her sighs and muffled shrieks
Carressing her will release the aromas of the good life
Beat the ritual beating you have been conditioned to.
Rise up off of your feet, tear yourself from the screen
Open up your mouth and with all your might, scream
Only the action of your step can shake the system
Only the sound of your voice will awaken the Gods.
Copyright ©
Adreana
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2007-08-18 06:56:40]
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Re: Uprise
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by ferasdour on
Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 07:20:51 AM AEST
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| yep |
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Re: Uprise
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by myheartsvoice on
Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 09:37:46 AM AEST
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Adreana this is beautiful, compelling, quite
forceful, i felt your karma in every sylable. In
short, a lovely masterpeice of dark literature.
take care . . .
Ben |
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Re: Uprise
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by endlesspath on
Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 11:52:55 AM AEST
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wow not as dark as i thought it would ed up to be
this was like reading something that needed to be realeased yet not shared to an extent
good post
endless |
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Re: Uprise
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by zenith66 on
Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 11:48:20 AM AEST
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this really speaks truth to me, if you do feel like this then i am with you, and isnt it so muc easier just to sit and do nothing, thats the sad truth, but you gave us all hope..
well done!!!!
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Re: Uprise
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 29th August 2007 @ 06:23:53 PM AEST
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| I see by your very strong poem a kindred soul. Well written good sense of balance in fact a most excellent poemGreetings from bern |
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