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love is forever
Contributed by
poetrygirl1991
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Saturday, 18th August 2007 @ 10:17:54 PM in AEST
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It's been months since i've talked to you until now.
at one point i actually thought i'd fallen in love with someone else.
but i already told you ,once you love someone your feelings dont ever go away,
they will always have a place in your heart.Once you truly love someone,you love them forever.
i miss that feeling that i get when im with you.
that everythings perfect,nothing can go wrong as long as im in your arms.
Been through alot together,and i don't regret a single moment of it because you're all worth it babe.
its all worth it to see your smile,and look into your eyes.kiss your lips and be held in your arms.
this time there will be acceptance, there has to be,cause i couldnt lose you again
you mean way to much to me,
i love you with all of my heart,
and no matter what happens along the way between us,you 'll always have a place in my heart.
its that simple.
when im with you i feel like a completely different person.
i don't worry or anything like that.
you make me feel like the most beautiful girl in the world,i feel safe and let's just say the moment i look into your eyes,all the pain i've ever felt goes away.
i trust you most,and that will never change.
i hope you're feeling the same way ,
but if not ill understand.
i love you baby,always and forever, that will never change.
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Re: love is forever
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by inlovewithaladd on
Sunday, 19th August 2007 @ 12:06:56 AM AEST
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first, good- simple and straightforward. not pretentious at all.
then, bad- chunky. poorly written. no real flow. not an engaging read.
I haven't read any of your other things so i don't know if this is just a bad example or what. All i know is this is not my style.
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