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Fabric Of My Mind
Contributed by
springchic1979
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Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
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Haunting are these vague memories.
So few I can recall.
My life just seems like patchwork dreams--
It makes no sense at all.
My quilt portrays the 'yesterdays'
Woven within my mind.
Disorderly embroidery
Intricately entwined.
Resentment spurns random patterns
Whose meanings are inane.
Does deranged art serve to impart
That I'm no longer sane?
As time goes by I question my
Mental stability.
I'm too far gone; a paragon
Of insecurity.
For many years my salty tears
Corroded consciousness.
Exposing pain, disdain did reign
With sheer maliciousness.
Now threads of hope just cannot cope
With feelings I've confined.
Each fragile stitch starts to unhitch
The fabric of my mind.
Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright 2003 Yvonne Denise Springer
Copyright ©
springchic1979
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Re: Fabric Of My Mind
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 03:04:12 AM AEST
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| Absolutely awesome as always ... I've longed for you to post another poem ... and here it is in sheer perfection .... beautiful. ... Jan |
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Re: Fabric Of My Mind
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by blueheart on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 05:34:45 AM AEST
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| Wonderful write. |
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Re: Fabric Of My Mind
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 09:01:37 AM AEST
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oh yvonne,
this is fantastic, love it and esp. the 'patchwork dreams' excellent:) great having you back!
huggs and love to you and yours always nessa |
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Re: Fabric Of My Mind
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by riverofwords on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 07:19:21 AM AEST
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whatt imagery,, whatt expression ..
what a magificant style ..loved it
awesome
peace be your journey
Terry
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Re: Fabric Of My Mind
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by springchic1979 on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 09:32:50 AM AEST
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Thank you DreamWeaver! I am really glad you enjoyed my poem. :)
Yvonne |
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Re: Fabric Of My Mind
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by springchic1979 on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 09:33:27 AM AEST
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Thank you very much blueheart :)
Yvonne |
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Re: Fabric Of My Mind
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by springchic1979 on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM AEST
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Thank you Nessa. It's great to be back! I am glad you liked the poem.
Love
Yvonne |
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Re: Fabric Of My Mind
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by springchic1979 on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 09:36:44 AM AEST
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What a nice comment ,Terry. Thank you for taking the time to read and respond.
Yvonne |
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Re: Fabric Of My Mind
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by Bizzy on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 10:30:03 AM AEST
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| Dear Springchic, I love this poem and relate to it. I felt like this many years. When you can write this with insight into yourself, you are on your way out of it. There are many reasons for feeling this way besides insanity, but it does make you wonder, doesn't it? Bizzy |
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Re: Fabric Of My Mind
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by springchic1979 on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 03:35:05 PM AEST
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Thank you, Bizzy. I'm not sure if its good or bad that you can relate to it, but I am glad that you did like the poem. lol
Yvonne |
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Re: Fabric Of My Mind
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by wolfflow on
Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 03:21:54 PM AEST
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| aah such poetry, such style, up there amongst the stars you are, an incredible poem |
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Re: Fabric Of My Mind
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by springchic1979 on
Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 07:31:43 PM AEST
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| You are sweet Wolfflow, Thank you. :) |
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Re: Fabric Of My Mind
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by karoody on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 05:13:07 PM AEST
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| this is brilliant. you protray your ideas so well. |
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Re: Fabric Of My Mind
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by springchic1979 on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 08:52:32 PM AEST
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Thank you Karoody! I appreciate your compliment :)
Yvonne |
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Re: Fabric Of My Mind
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by allie_07 on
Friday, 18th March 2011 @ 03:02:49 PM AEST
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| great imagery. |
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